tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8023159853864985394.post4326031037618297931..comments2018-10-27T15:20:51.492+01:00Comments on The Assorted Writings of Mark A. Morris: There goes the neighbourhood! (Another weekend flash fiction!)Mark A Morrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00855198804375011390noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8023159853864985394.post-42124128764349801832014-06-29T19:41:46.094+01:002014-06-29T19:41:46.094+01:00No worries. I can work with that, Camp Nano permit...No worries. I can work with that, Camp Nano permitting! :-)Mark A Morrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00855198804375011390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8023159853864985394.post-72244337406677545972014-06-29T19:27:55.917+01:002014-06-29T19:27:55.917+01:00Absolutely :-) I might work next weeks daily promp...Absolutely :-) I might work next weeks daily prompt theme around a 'last sentence', though I wouldn't want to cramp your style! Melissa Barker-Simpsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06056595790661418625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8023159853864985394.post-62402036968529792092014-06-29T19:20:13.295+01:002014-06-29T19:20:13.295+01:00I like to keep the options open. It easily could g...I like to keep the options open. It easily could go in a number of directions from here and I think leaving the reader guessing - for a while, if it's a full-blown story - helps to engage their attention. And I do love my last lines...Mark A Morrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00855198804375011390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8023159853864985394.post-66036397857748275832014-06-29T18:54:27.721+01:002014-06-29T18:54:27.721+01:00Wow, that last sentence is a killer - so subtle an...Wow, that last sentence is a killer - so subtle and yet threatening. It gave me chills. I really enjoyed this story. I liked her sensual energy, and the ambiguity so I could decide what kind of creature she is :-) Poor James - he's not going to know what hit him! I sensed she liked him though, if only to toy with :-)Melissa Barker-Simpsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06056595790661418625noreply@blogger.com